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Correct spelling and lightly copy edit the home page

I've fixed a bunch of spelling issues and done a light copy edit
of the home page:
- Standardized the spelling. There was a mix of US and British
  English. Most of the site seems to be US, so I used that as
  the standard.
- Standardized the names of products and services with reference
  to their own websites (StatusNet, diaspora*, etc.).
- Did a light copy edit for readability and style.
- Tweaked punctuation so lists end with full stops and we get some
  proper em-dashes in there.
- Fixed misc. typos and spelling errors.
feature/localfonts
St John Karp 5 years ago
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<div class="flex flex-3">
<article>
<header>
<h3>Decentralisation</h3>
<h3>Decentralization</h3>
</header>
<p>Decentralised architecture with no central authority or ownership</p>
<p>Relationships can be made across any compatible system, creating a network of internet scale made up of smaller sites</p>
<p>Seamless wall-to-wall posts and remote comments, even across different network nodes</p>
<p>Decentralized architecture with no central authority or ownership.</p>
<p>Relationships can be made across any compatible system, creating a network of Internet scale made up of smaller sites.</p>
<p>Seamless wall-to-wall posts and remote comments, even across different network nodes.</p>
</article>
<article>
<header>
<h3>Privacy</h3>
</header>
<p>Access list on every items</p>
<p>Private conversation groups - on these pages all communications are restricted to group members</p>
<p>One-to-one private messaging on supported protocols</p>
<p>Access lists for every item.</p>
<p>Private conversation groups &mdash; on these pages all communications are restricted to group members.</p>
<p>One-to-one private messaging on supported protocols.</p>
<p>Optionally "expire" old content after a certain period of time.</p>
<p>Download your personal data. It all belongs to you.</p>
</article>
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<header>
<h3>Interoperability</h3>
</header>
<p>Built-in support for status.net, GNU-social, quitter, Diaspora</p>
<p>Email contacts and communications supported (two-way) via IMAP4rev1/ESMTP</p>
<p>Arbitrary websites and blogs may be imported into your social stream via RSS/Atom feeds</p>
<p>Plugin support to other services</p>
<p>Built-in support for StatusNet, GNU social, Quitter, and diaspora*.</p>
<p>Support for email contacts and communications (two-way) via IMAP4rev1/ESMTP.</p>
<p>Import arbitrary websites and blogs into your social stream via RSS/Atom feeds.</p>
<p>Support for other services via plugins.</p>
</article>
</div>
</div>
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<div class="inner">
<header>
<h2>A personal social network</h2>
<p>Keep in contact only with people you care</p>
<p>Keep in contact with people you care about.</p>
</header>
<div class="flex flex-4">
<div class="box person">
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<i class="fa fa-calendar" aria-hidden="true"></i>
</div>
<h3>Events</h3>
<p>Organize next meeting of your reading group, or let everybody know about your cool party!</p>
<p>Organize the next meeting of your reading group, or let everybody know about your cool party!</p>
</div>
<div class="box person">
<div class="image round">
<i class="fa fa-users" aria-hidden="true"></i>
</div>
<h3>Profiles</h3>
<p>Like in real life, have a public profile and private aspects only for your closest friends. Or keep everything private!</p>
<p>Like in real life, have a public profile and private aspects only for your closest friends. Or keep everything private!</p>
</div>
</div>
<footer>
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<section id="three" class="wrapper special">
<div class="inner">
<header class="align-center">
<h2>Free software - Free protocols</h2>
<h2>Free software &mdash; Free protocols</h2>
<p>Friendica is free software and use free protocols.</p>
</header>
<div class="flex flex-2">
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<header>
<h3>PHP &amp; MySQL</h3>
</header>
<p>Run your personal Friendica node on shared hosts</p>
<p>Friendica runs on PHP with MySQL as database. If you can run Wordpress, you can run Friendica.</p>
<p>Run your personal Friendica node on shared hosts.</p>
<p>Friendica runs on PHP with MySQL as a database. If you can run WordPress, you can run Friendica.</p>
<footer>
<a href="/requirements/" class="button special">More</a>
</footer>
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<header>
<h3>Extensible</h3>
</header>
<p>Extensible via third-party plugin modules and themes.</p>
<p>Add functionalities, personalize look and feel, connect to thirty-part serivces.</p>
<p>Extensible via third-party plugins and themes.</p>
<p>Add functionality, personalize the look and feel, connect to third-party services.</p>
<footer>
<a href="https://github.com/friendica/friendica-addons" class="button special">More</a>
</footer>

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