From 0765323b174a5ee4cfd1b49c5c62838463d9eed4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Macgirvin Date: Sun, 26 Sep 2010 22:38:52 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] more readme chgs --- README | 19 ++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/README b/README index 38b2cf5a8..25adb169e 100644 --- a/README +++ b/README @@ -18,21 +18,22 @@ A single instance of Mistpark Server supports up to several hundred people using commodity hosting hardware. Each of these people can connect with any other mistpark/DFRN cell anywhere in the world and share photos, links, status updates, whatever. Also available from Mistpark Labs is -Mistpark Personal Edition, which supports a single user. +Mistpark Personal Edition, which supports a single person. Mistpark may also be closed off from the global community and used to support social networking amongst corporate, educational, religious, and other private -communities. This makes it an excellent choice for providing a safe social -networking environment to young teenagers, as opposed to (for instance) -Facebook. +communities. This makes it an excellent choice for the social networking needs +of young teenagers. Their network can grow to global scope as their maturity +increases - and can be made available only to their known friends until then. -Every user has unlimited profiles available. There is a "public profile" which -can be seen by anybody. Additional profiles may be tailored to specific -groups or individuals - and shown when a known friend visits your site. +Every person on Mistpark has unlimited profiles available to them. There is a +"public profile" which can be seen by anybody. Additional profiles may be +tailored to specific groups or individuals - and shown when a known friend +visits your site. Groups may be setup for closed conversations (like Diaspora's "aspects"). In -this way your conversations with drinking buddies may be kept separate from -conversations with co-workers (for instance). +this way your conversations with drinking buddies may be kept completely +separate from conversations with co-workers (for instance). Please see http://dfrn.org for more information on the mistpark/DFRN project.