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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ using commodity hosting hardware. Each of these people can connect with any
other supported network anywhere in the world and share photos, links,
status updates, whatever.
But maybe you don't want to be connect to the world. That's OK too. Mistpark
But maybe you don't want to be connected to the world. That's OK too. Mistpark
may also be closed off from the global community and used to support
social networking amongst corporate, educational, religious, and other private
communities. This makes it an excellent choice for the social networking needs
@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ Every person on Mistpark has unlimited profiles available to them. There is a
"public profile" which can be seen by anybody. Additional profiles may be
tailored to specific groups or individuals.
Groups may be setup for closed conversations. In this way your conversations
with one group of friends is completely isolated from other friends or groups
of friends.
Groups may be created and used for closed conversations. In this way your
conversations with one group of friends is completely isolated from other
friends or groups of friends.
Please see http://mistpark.com for more information.