From 957827bda7ea1a5003222a49db94130ec9fb73cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Macgirvin Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2010 15:04:52 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] proofreading nits --- README | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/README b/README index fcf73e1763..8425e0cbaa 100644 --- a/README +++ b/README @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ using commodity hosting hardware. Each of these people can connect with any other supported network anywhere in the world and share photos, links, status updates, whatever. -But maybe you don't want to be connect to the world. That's OK too. Mistpark +But maybe you don't want to be connected to the world. That's OK too. Mistpark may also be closed off from the global community and used to support social networking amongst corporate, educational, religious, and other private communities. This makes it an excellent choice for the social networking needs @@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ Every person on Mistpark has unlimited profiles available to them. There is a "public profile" which can be seen by anybody. Additional profiles may be tailored to specific groups or individuals. -Groups may be setup for closed conversations. In this way your conversations -with one group of friends is completely isolated from other friends or groups -of friends. +Groups may be created and used for closed conversations. In this way your +conversations with one group of friends is completely isolated from other +friends or groups of friends. Please see http://mistpark.com for more information.