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 <img src="images/mistpark-net.jpg" alt="mistpark network logo" align="left" style="margin-right: 50px;" />
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-<li style="margin-bottom: 5px;">Bring your privacy back home - where it belongs.</li>
-<li style="margin-bottom: 5px;">Share your life with your friends and family - privately, securely.</li>
-<li style="margin-bottom: 5px;">Join mistpark, the "dispersed" social network from Australia. </li>
+<li style="margin-bottom: 8px;">Bring your privacy back home - where it belongs.</li>
+<li style="margin-bottom: 8px;">Share your life with your friends and family online - privately, securely.</li>
+<li style="margin-bottom: 8px;">Join the <a href="http://mistpark.com">mistpark social network</a> today and become a citizen of the new republic.</li>
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-<p style="font-size: 1.3em;">(You don't have to be an Aussie to distrust what your current social network <u>might</u> be doing with your private information...)</p>
-<div style="height: 30px;" ></div>
+<p style="font-size: 1.2em;">* Republic <i>n.</i> - a state or nation where the supreme power lies with its citizens.</p>
+<p>Please sign in or register.</p>